Abuse in six words

22 Oct

He came;

I whimpered.

He laughed.

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Written for a Hemingway-esque contest for my school. I had about a minute to write it. It wasn’t until after I pinned it up that I noticed the double-entendre that fit disturbingly well. It’s funny to me how accidents, at times, are what make a piece.

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